Wednesday, March 24, 2021

Chased By The Pogo Stick

 
When he went up high into the air if felt like he was flying when he was up three stories high he seen people staring at him and clapping. He seen sunlight reflecting off the building and it caught his eyes and he jumped onto the building.

She took very good care for her geese. The geese would not come out because something made them fly away with out gabby knowing.The girl was shocked to see that they flew out of the cage. She got some other geese and she wasn't happy because they were the same geese.

2 comments:

  1. very good writing I like that you put the to stories together. Maybe you could put a title on your second story. But you did a really good job. I can't wait to see what you post next.

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  2. Hi Christibel, i really like at start how he went up three stories on a pogo stick.

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