Miss Moats class reading
Doing Anzac school work makes me feel sad. I feel sorry for the people who fought in the war.
Monday, April 20, 2020
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Hey Christibel it's Ambar here I like how you have put some work on your blog.my feed back is put some more writing and make the writing despictive use more details and add why you did it and what you were learning.
ReplyDeleteKeep that good work up Christibel you are doing really well
ReplyDeleteHi Christibel,
ReplyDeleteI see you have been thinking hard about Anzac day, it was a difficult time for all the soldiers who fought in the war, as well as their families who missed them.
We will be able to think about them on Anzac day, have you made any Anzac biscuits yet?
Hi Christibel
ReplyDeleteI liked your work on the 'In the End' story. You have thought quite a bit about how being in that situation would feel. It would have been very hard especially for the very young soldiers and nurses. Well done on what you have written.