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Wow! That was a great speech Christibel. I really enjoyed listening to how you can do a back flip on the trampoline! You read your speech really well. Next time you should try and make it a bit longer. Tino Pai Rawa! Mr Milne
Hi Christibel, I am Mahrosh from Hay Park School. I liked your speech about bravery. I wish I could do a back flip like you, but I can't. Maybe next time you should say how your parents felt about when you did a back flip.
Hi my name is Mina I come from haypark school, The writing you have done it realy intresting and awesome. I liked it, This reminted me when I we walking in a park a saw, a bounch of ants I saw red one and, black ones It was so scary. There where like 37 of them, there where way to much I was so scard.
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Wow! That was a great speech Christibel. I really enjoyed listening to how you can do a back flip on the trampoline! You read your speech really well. Next time you should try and make it a bit longer. Tino Pai Rawa! Mr Milne
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Mr Milne for your Amazing comment and next time I will make it longer!!
ReplyDeleteHi Christibel, I am Mahrosh from Hay Park School. I liked your speech about bravery. I wish I could do a back flip like you, but I can't. Maybe next time you should say how your parents felt about when you did a back flip.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Mina I come from haypark school, The writing you have done it realy intresting and awesome. I liked it, This reminted me when I we walking in a park a saw, a bounch of ants I saw red one and, black ones It was so scary. There where like 37 of them, there where way to much I was so scard.
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